The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
I really enjoyed the repetition of "choose life" in all of our circumstances. Effective writing. I don't think you needed the parenthetical comments at the end; they were almost anticlimactic after such a meaningful poem. Thanks for the encouragement!
06/26/06
Ever thought about having this scored...very much like a lyric.