The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Ah..yes, the beautiful Life; God's creation; the sunsets, the breeze, the very air we breathe; however, a few little typo's or goofs here and there - but a restful, peaceful look at nature. Thanks for sharing.
06/23/06
What a lovely, serene word picture! Be careful of switches in tense and POV. You did a good job of putting the reader right in the scene with you.
06/24/06
Wow, I could see it right before my eyes! Great, fluid, vivid descriptions!
You have something good here. I wish it was a little longer though.Keep writing. :)
06/26/06
Good start and very descriptive, expand the next one. Oh, and always look at the preview before posting.