The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/06
A little short on Topic matter, but a good message; needs a little editing, but a good effort. Keep writing.
06/19/06
Good start on what could be a very good piece. Good dialogue handling.
06/20/06
Good interchange of ideas. A lot of promise. Keep writing and get to be a little more longer so that the readers can get the hang of what you want them to know!