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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Abundance (06/08/06)

TITLE: More and More of You Lord
By Indrani Kandasamy
06/15/06


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I cry out in the midst of anguish
Lord! I lack insight
As I look around, People too wonderful and strong
Anger and bitterness spreads I cry again
Lord Are you in Control? I lack understanding
I walk alone thinking of how wonderful it would be if I could
have a friend beside me.
O Lord I cry. I lack sight of you
I have sinned and my past haunts me back often
Lord what do I do? I scream I lack your authority you have given me.
I am struggling with desire and Lust,
Lord how I lack obedience to your word.
I need to make a decision. I need to know
If I can just stay or move out, Lord I'm lacking wisdom.
This guy. this gal hurt me hmmm I wish I cud just give them
back a hard time for doing so
It hurts Lord I want the heart to forgive
Look at my heart. And all the filthiness and sores,
Bleeding bleeding on and on.
Give me more of you in abundance I pray.
More and More of you
Just to love, Just to heal,
Just to forgive,
Just to help one in need
Just as you loved, healed, forgave and helped me


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dub W06/19/06
Strong personal plea and poetic prayer. Sometimes the verse we write surpasses the rules of poetry and remains locked in our hearts - it's personal, it's good for us, it's right in our heart. Thank you for sharing this poetic moment.
Venice Kichura06/19/06
I agree. I enjoyed this---sounds straight from the heart.