The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
Cute story You illustrated well the abundance that we celebrate at Thanksgiving...husband, kids, family, food etc. My favorite line was "The greatest praise my Tim could ever give someone is to compare them to one of the dozens of animals he loves to kill and eat." Funny line that paints a picture for the reader and tell alot about the character. Great writing!
06/19/06
Pretty cute and humorous. I doubt that you all scream at each other all the time - lose the exclamation marks.
06/26/06
What a cute story, you made it very easy to see the pictures. The people getting dressed, the kitchen and cooking going on and even the children playing. Very good job.