The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
From the heart, your piece does a good job of showing the contrast of life before and after Jesus and how he can brings abundance into one's life. I would like to have had a little more detail on the "after" side, but perhaps that pesky word limit confined you. Good writing with an raw honesty that touches the reader.
06/19/06
Powerful testimony. Probably, the word limit caused you to clip some of the story, and a couple of sentences needed help. But, all in all, this is one that should be read to a senior high youth group.