The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/06
A beautiful story that I wish and I hope could be true. The language barrier, of course, is what makes it seem unreal - but a Great Story. It needs some editing and paragraphing, but a very touching story. I liked it.
06/19/06
Tight piece, that might have been broadened. Split the paragraphs with a space for readability. I think you have a good start here. With work this could build into a wonderful testament to God's power.