The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt like you had much more to say about your life. I was wanting to read more on what it was like grwoing up "in a house full of women." Would like to see a different word than "stuff" at the end of the 6th paragraph. Pet peeve I guess.
06/17/06
There is a beginning, there is a middle...but No Ending! Readers need an ending, and this Reader was very disappointed not to have one.
We hope, just as the mother hopes, but we need to know. Thanks for sharing.
06/17/06
Sorry! Wrong COMMENT! This was meant for another Entry. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!
06/17/06
"Good & Plenty's" - I remember them well. I always picked out the licorice ones first. Your entry is right on target and is very well written. Yes, we're truly blessed in this country. An interesting read - job well done.
06/19/06
Good start on this essay, a lot of paragraphs seemed to need more for completion, but this is a pretty good personal statement.