The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/06
Wow. This one gets my vote, that is if I had one.
I read it to my family this morning as a devotional.
Thanks for putting the topic in perspective.
06/19/06
Interesting approach. Make sure, in dialogue, that each speaker gets their own paragraph.
06/21/06
A good comparison on abundance. Well done.
06/21/06
As a missionary, I hope this is a thing of the past: "The missionary children danced around the yellow aircraft as their father unloaded box after box of second-hand donations. Ragged teddy bears, scuffed shoes, and worn clothes." But what you have written is wonderful. Congratulations.