The Official Writing Challenge
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Having just moved out of the busy city into the country, I could literally "hear" the chatter of these little creatures kept in God's gentle care. Your discriptiveness paints very colorful pictures and is easy to follow. Nice piece ~ I thoroughly enjoyed it! :)
Very peaceful and pleasant work. A couple of grammar issues - run ons and so forth, but a good effort and an enjoyable read.
What an interesting take on the theme. Many of us "see" all these neighbours everyday, but never really "see" them as evidence of God's bounty or of that wonderful verse of scripture that you quoted. Good job.