The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
Composed well. Although the story worked, it was too expected, and probably needed some support. Email me if you want some suggestions.
06/18/06
What a beautiful and touching story! A few little goofs here and there in the spelling or typos, but nothing a little editing could take care of - just a great story, and well done!