The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/06
Well done. I liked the Parisian comparision, so true, God waits, but like you or the person in your story, He is there ready for us - we just have to ask. Thanks for posting this story.
06/21/06
Very good. I like the way you tell this story - held my attention and kept me reading. I like the trip to McD - what a comparison to a 5-star restaurant! :)