The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
This has a wonderful poetic feel to it - very nice
06/09/06
This was an entry that seemed to bring "inner peace" to me...kind of a peaceful, restful way to express the topic, and also to bring peace to the Reader...nicely done.
06/10/06
Your writing was good and convencing, as I read it, I was beginning to think you were peace.
06/12/06
Very lyrical and peaceful, nicely done.
This was well done. It had almost a sing song quality about it. Very nice.
06/13/06
I like this for its simpleness, yet profound depth. Very nice.
I enjoyed the peaceful simplicity and yet complexity of thought. I especially liked your descriptions of the relationship of peace to faith and hope. Great job!
06/14/06
Beautiful! This should be read slowly, softly, savoring each line. Great work!
06/14/06
Personification isn't easy, but you did a good job with this :)
06/14/06
A soothing read. "I am the sound of sweet silence..." Very nice. "I take residence where there is trust." Good job!
07/14/06
How did i miss this one! This is awesome! Beautiful because the essence is so true. Beautiful truths in beautiful words.