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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Personal Peace (06/01/06)

TITLE: I Am Peace
By Mark Anthony Belosa
06/08/06


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I am peace.

I originated from Heaven - my King’s dwelling place, and I am come to help ease your pain, to heal, to strengthen.

I am peace.

I bring harmony to one’s soul, music to one’s spirit, light to the one taken captive by anxieties. I am the sound of sweet silence and the color of quietness. Be still, and know Your God! Listen! Listen and live!

I am peace.

I coexist with faith. I take residence where there is trust – complete and solid trust. I take no pleasure in worry. I am hope’s best friend. I am here to remind you,” Cast your cares upon Him for He cares for you.”

I am peace.

I am the fruit of divine dependence, the savor of a praying heart. I am not hard to find, for I am as close to those who know how to draw near unto God.

I am peace.

Rest in me, troubled soul! You are greatly loved!

Hmmmmmm…

Hmmmmmm…

Yes, I am peace.


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Shari Armstrong 06/09/06
This has a wonderful poetic feel to it - very nice
Marilyn Schnepp 06/09/06
This was an entry that seemed to bring "inner peace" to me...kind of a peaceful, restful way to express the topic, and also to bring peace to the Reader...nicely done.
Alfreda Byars06/10/06
Your writing was good and convencing, as I read it, I was beginning to think you were peace.
Jan Ackerson 06/12/06
Very lyrical and peaceful, nicely done.
Dr. Sharon Schuetz06/13/06
This was well done. It had almost a sing song quality about it. Very nice.
Virginia Gorg06/13/06
I like this for its simpleness, yet profound depth. Very nice.
Sharlyn Guthrie06/13/06
I enjoyed the peaceful simplicity and yet complexity of thought. I especially liked your descriptions of the relationship of peace to faith and hope. Great job!
Anita Neuman06/14/06
Beautiful! This should be read slowly, softly, savoring each line. Great work!
Shari Armstrong 06/14/06
Personification isn't easy, but you did a good job with this :)
Jen Davis06/14/06
A soothing read. "I am the sound of sweet silence..." Very nice. "I take residence where there is trust." Good job!
Pat Guy 07/14/06
How did i miss this one! This is awesome! Beautiful because the essence is so true. Beautiful truths in beautiful words.