The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
Wow--what a story! I really wanted to read more about the encounter in the woods--would have like to read that with dialog, more in "story form" But regardless, this is a stirring testimony, and I really enjoyed reading it.
06/13/06
From "lip service" to heart-felt emotion. Nicely done and a good testimony.
06/14/06
This is a wonderful testimony! I liked the scene description in the 5th paragraph. It set the stage for what was to come. I did notice several run-on sentences. I also agree that it would be great to expand on the scene in the forest. The 750 word limit does hinder doesn't it? Thank you for sharing this example of God's saving grace!