The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt like I had a glimpse of your day and what a positive spin. Enjoy those babies for they will become teens. Your thoughts flowed with ease. Keep it up!
06/08/06
Delightful
06/08/06
"The warriors need to rejuventate"--great line. This is a very precious poem.
06/08/06
I meant "rejuvenate", of course.
Tea with the Lord, what a quite peace. Loved your poem.

May Our Heavenly Father guide your pen and bless your writing.

Trina
06/13/06
Very cute. I only have one child, but I can relate now with two grandchildren living with us. Well-written poetry.
I loved the poem about your boys. of course, by lunch time, I am the one who is exhausted instead of my 4 boys. Nice job.