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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Personal Peace (06/01/06)

TITLE: PEACEMAKERS
By Ian Dennison
06/05/06


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Is our peace personal?
Is our peace real?
Is our peace realizable?
Is it still there?

Peacemakers, let's soldier on;
Let's sing a song....
of justice eternally;
And know what mission we're on...
It's not buried in mystery;

Our mission's the Lord's plan...
for all who seek Him out;
Let's celebrate His victories
Find peace within & without....

worries can inflict us with disquiet
and disdain;
but peacful portents spell tranquillity again...on the sunny side of life;

Peacemakers, shine from within &
realize what soulful solitude can gain
for troubled souls and freedom from sin;

May the white dove of peace become a spiritual sign...of the Holy Spirit shining from our minds;
and let's praise God for that special gift of a profound sense of security within;

Peacemakers, let's sing and shout; there's really no doubt...we're blessed like never before...let's not close the door...to life-changing options and respond with a roar...of happiness;

Make peace an award;
offer peace instead of war and find your souls again...within your very beings...within your roles in life & in peaceful contemplations;

You're winning life's battles;
Arm yourselves with truth;
Don't spoil the matters we deal with each day;
Give peace a chance.....


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Al Boyce06/09/06
Some good thoughts here that just need tidying up. I would suggest making this look more like poetry in structure, keeping the lines and stanzas equal. It's also a little disruptive to use & instead of the word 'and.'
Keep up the good work.
God bless
Al