The Official Writing Challenge
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Good stuff! Very creative. Well done
06/08/06
Very sweet allegory. The ending surprised me, but it worked with showing how we can have peace in the midst of everything.
06/08/06
Sweet enough. Now, get rid of most of the affirmations and lose nearly all of the exclamation marks. Good effort.
I enjoyed your creative story. With four sons, I hope I am wearing my peace coat when I go out.
Just reading around and came on this. This is really good. Sometimes the challenge articles are more fitting for my newsletter than the free reprint article. (Don't anyone worry, I'm not using them without permission.) They are shorter for one thing. But, enough. This piece (no pun) really ministers to me.