The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
The opening line caught my eye and so I read on. Glad I did, this is well written, intriguing, and thought provoking. I think the ending said everything. My opinion - masterful job.
06/13/06
The answer often stares us in the face, and we miss it. Nice writing and a good take on peace.
This was excellent. Well written, and very clever approach. good Job.
10/29/06
I missed this one, til now. You really have a talent for writing a good story. And, such creativity, with your play on the word "peace!" Nothing to "critique," here. This is simply excellent writing.
And, thank you for your comment on my "Footnotes" story. I appreciate it.