The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/06
To lure more Readers into your devotional - try spacing between paragraphs; which makes it more reader friendly. Nice job with a good message.
06/12/06
Good job. I agree with the above comment about the spacing, but other than that, this piece reminds the reader of the peace that comes from God's word. Very encouraging, exhorting piece! The exhortation really comes through strongly.
Good job. I agree about the paragraph spacing.