The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
Heart-touching! You had me right there with you. I love the ending!
06/02/06
Excellent read, with tears flowing. All is for a purpose. Thanks for sharing.
06/03/06
A heart wrenching story, but a little hard to follow at times. Smooth out the time line a bit, and this will be a very powerful piece.
06/04/06
A bittersweet story that touches the heart strings; and very well written. Beautiful ending. Thank you.
06/06/06
Heartfelt writing for a God solving problem. Great work!