The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
A nicely written piece about the crucifixion. Indeed, a "strange way to save the world," yet the only way possible. Thanks for sharing.
Well done! Creative approach to our most vital story--HIS! You carried off with punch and dramatic flair.

You might want to comb through and pick off those pesky adverbs; they can weaken your excellent style.

Onward, soldier! Nice work.

06/03/06
I liked the conversational parts, like we're overhearing the crowds, but I think the end kind of distrupted the flow. Maybe make it more like the first part, but from some of those who'd seen Him.
06/04/06
An excellent Read, and one that makes one contemplate the whole story of salvation. Very creative and held this Reader's interest. Well done.