The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
A purpose for everyone. This is a great story, and nicely told. :)
Oh, how you made me long for the day when any "Joe" would get such a reception from a church! Very nice, descriptive style. I thoroughly enjoyed it--thank you!
06/04/06
Such a delightful way to show how Joe discovered his purpose in life - creative and well written. Good Job!
06/05/06
Loved it! This line was really cool: "He wanted to turn and walk back into the rain but the intention didn’t reach his feet. " A great witness, a very natural way to share the gospel.
You shouldn't be posting on intermediate level. Your vocabulary is awesome, and your descriptions....whoa.
A winner in my book.
06/08/06
This is wonderful! Congratulations! Something worth remembering for every believer.
06/13/06
Pure and Unconditional Kindness. This story beautifully illustrates the power of kindness. It inspires me to want to be more like these people.
Ditto on all above comments as well. Awesome!