The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
Awesome! I love how you use the lily to show a story from the Gospels.

It would be a good children's book too--I could see it illustrated and everything. :-)
06/02/06
"the trees bent toward Him" - you use words so well, I can see the trees and flowers reaching. As soon as perfume was made, I wondered if this would be "the bottle." Really well done. :)
06/04/06
A wonderful Read! I loved it; however, it needs a footnote with the scripture that this beautiful story is taken from - for those who do not know or remember that story from the Bible. Wonderful way to describe the topic of Purpose! Well done!
06/05/06
Wonderful descriptions and story. I love the characters of the flowers.