The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
Rainbows are spectacular - you wove a well-done story into that. Nicely done and good use of words. You probably should spell out the numbers (three instead of 3). Overall, I rate this very high :)
06/05/06
I loved your story, it was almost as if I could see the rainbow myself.
06/05/06
Loved the poem! Very, very true about the rainbow fading like a woman's beauty! Well written.
06/05/06
A lovely story -good job :)