The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
I thought this was about cats - I was fooled. I like this a lot. Well written and has a realistic feel to it. Good writing talent and use of descriptive words. Only suggestion is to spell out the numbers (three and five). :)
cute story of a purposeful pup. Nice job.
Delightful story, tenderly written! This could be developed into a smashing children's book.

Lovely descriptions. I like "fluffy white clouds tumbling across the brilliant blue sky were simply mesmerizing to him." (I think I need a break from this computer. Basking in the sun, watching fluffy clouds go by sounds heavenly!)

Thanks for a heartwarming, well-written entry!
Very clever, indeed!! Great dialogue, and you held my attention through to the end. A winner!
06/06/06
What a sweet story! this would be good to help kids understand the seeing eye dog program.
Congratulations, Gwynn! Your fine piece won special recognition out of a huge field of contestants, just as I hoped! Well-deserved!