The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done, flows well, and has good content. Watch "rode trip", should be "road". God can open doors in ways we don't expect.
Duh! I can't believe I used the wrong 'rode' ... thanks for noticing!
"Rode Trip" gave this article a bad start - but it bloomed into a nice "witness" and "answer to prayer" story; but a bit shy on the topic of Personal Peace. However, a great read and written well with that one exception..."rode trip". Nice Job.
Thanks for instilling hope for unsaved family members. I could relate to your prayers on how to share your faith with your siblings. I have prayed many times too. Nice job.
A great testimony :) maybe make the break between the past (car ride) and the sharing of the brother being saved in a new paragraph, it was kind of a jolting transition. I hear them teasing each other, as only siblings can do :)