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06/02/06
A cute, modern take on a well-known event. Nicely done. I like when he asks God to open her mind, too. :)
Well done! I loved the paragraph starting "He felt the light before..." That's a cool visual picture of measurements and dimensions being totally downloaded by His Teacher! Good job.
06/05/06
I can hear it now; the Mrs. saying "A What? A Boat in the middle of a desert?" Ah, what a beautiful Bible Story...I love it! Nicely done. Well written.
06/09/06
Very good - I love the way you got into Noah's head :)