The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
The second paragraph was the best; telling about the beautiful things we see, and I liked the "idea" that perhaps God created Man so that He could share this beauty with others. However, the rest was a sermonette - which, for me was not exactly my cup of tea. Repetitious, as I am aware of what a Christian's purpose in life is - but for those who are not of the Christian faith...you did make some very good points...and nicely done.
06/08/06
Some great details and descriptions, but you lose that as you go into the study portiong. It's a very good study, and with a longer word count, you can bring more great images into the last part :)