The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/05
This is a great illustration of "Bloom where you're planted", which is sometimes the most difficult, especially when we have larger visions and dreams. Great writing!
03/01/05
I enjoyed this very much. I could be looking in a mirror for parts of that conversation. So wonderful to be reminded that God will help us serve him - if we'd only get out of the way and let him do it (guess that's the hard part!).

Great entry, keep up the good work!
The character here was one that most of us can relate to. I think it is the woman next door who is the greatest challenge sometime! I love the human qualities you gave this person
Oh Suzanne, this is GREAT! I loved every too believable (and familiar) line. Awesome job! If the competition wasn't so incredibly tough you would be in the book. A winner with me. You might try to have it published elsewhere. I think many will relate and benefit from this truthful, well written piece.