The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
Cute father-son story.
Future engineer! Nice story.
06/01/06
Great story! Like the interaction between father and son. Good job!
06/03/06
Good stuff. I really liked the story line here. Watch the adverbs and all will be well.
06/04/06
Hunger makes people work, but what makes a clock work, eh? I'm still waiting for the answer...but sweet father and son story with a purpose. Well written.
06/08/06
Delightful! My husband was one who wasn't happy with his toys unless he could take them apart. I love the father being willing to do what it took to get the clock :)