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Great writing and a different background for the theme. Good job.
Very enjoyable, thank you.
Fast moving piece. I enjoyed it very much. You certainly showed the "joy". Well done.
A wonderful love story! It moved fast and told all the needed details in just the right places. It read like the climax of a good movie!!Good job!!:) As a former military wife...I do remember those separations!
Great dialogue. I felt quite breathless reading it!
You definitely had me breathless. I'm a softy for the joy of romance. A wonderful gift you have!
Ahhhh! The joy of reunion in the service! Well done! Great scenery, dialogue, everything! Very enjoyable read!
Good stuff. Nicely handled dialogue...loved the pace of this piece.
I felt breathless after reading this! A great effect!
Oh, what a breathlessly beautiful love story! Your writing reads as if I am viewing a movie in my head. In my opinion, you are already a master. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks! p.s. what about Rose's husband?
Very well done. I loved it. You packed so much into 750 words. Great job. Congratulations on your move up.
Fast paced, fun read. Clear characterisation and sense of place. Enjpyed it.