The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Great writing and a different background for the theme. Good job.
Very enjoyable, thank you.
Fast moving piece. I enjoyed it very much. You certainly showed the "joy". Well done.
05/26/06
A wonderful love story! It moved fast and told all the needed details in just the right places. It read like the climax of a good movie!!Good job!!:) As a former military wife...I do remember those separations!
05/27/06
Great dialogue. I felt quite breathless reading it!
05/28/06
You definitely had me breathless. I'm a softy for the joy of romance. A wonderful gift you have!
05/29/06
Ahhhh! The joy of reunion in the service! Well done! Great scenery, dialogue, everything! Very enjoyable read!
05/29/06
Good stuff. Nicely handled dialogue...loved the pace of this piece.
05/29/06
I felt breathless after reading this! A great effect!
05/30/06
Oh, what a breathlessly beautiful love story! Your writing reads as if I am viewing a movie in my head. In my opinion, you are already a master. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks! p.s. what about Rose's husband?
Very well done. I loved it. You packed so much into 750 words. Great job. Congratulations on your move up.
06/01/06
Fast paced, fun read. Clear characterisation and sense of place. Enjpyed it.