The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/06
Lovely poem/ prayer. Love its message, and your images and word use. Good job
05/28/06
Heart touch poem, a prayer from the heart!
05/28/06
What an absolutely lovely prayer.
This touches something inside. Good job. Lovely imgage. Thanks.
05/29/06
This is how free verse should be done. It has a rhythm of its own, and the words are absolutely melodic!

I noticed a couple of typos, so if you decide to submit this elsewhere, give it an extra check. Otherwise, this piece is absolutely beautiful! Great work.
Very nice flowing peice. Good job.