The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
What a beautiful story. Well done.
05/25/06
*sniffles* wow, that is amazing. But wouldn't the hospital have put the mother on bedrest and possibly kept her there to be watched with bleeding?
05/27/06
I've been there. Well written, good message. I didn't like the first three words - sounded too much like the usual blasphemy that many would say in that situation. Otherwise - great.
05/31/06
"Ditto" to what Helen said about the first three words - and I'm still trying to find the JOY in this sad, sad story. Perhaps I need to re-read it over and over to see what I am missing - but it is a well written story nonetheless; just not my idea of Joy.