The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh yes, am there and wish I could do that! A wonderful read.
I think I'm going to print this out and pin it to my fridge! Loved it, very funny, especially the last line.
Perfect story for this time of year. Nice job.
Fun story. A good light-hearted take on the topic.
Good fun! Nicely done!
Lisa, good story! I understand the sentiment of desire for chocolate. I liked this line "As the days wore on, I constantly refereed these two fighting foes." Very nice!
From one chocoholic to another--you nailed it.
Really fun story! I enjoyed reading it. I think we've all battled the dreaded bathing suit at one time or another. Great story!
Good story. You hit a common nerve with many of us. I loved it.
All the commenters ENJOYED your story, saying it was a FUN read, light-hearted etc., but I went through every pain wracked minute of every day with you! Without one once of joy. It was excruciating! I could feel the pain, the longing, the terrible I've Been There/Done That! PS: Loved the story...just agonized with you all the way, that's all!
Nice Job!