The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Yes, we are allowed to be sad and to grieve, but that shouldn't rob us of our joy in the Lord. You found a good way to express that truth. Nicely done.
Nice dialoge between the sisters. I think you could have given more detail. Many people who have lost loved ones, lose their happiness and their joy. You pointed out that joy comes from trusting the Lord. Nice job.
05/27/06
Good piece. It took a turn I didn;t expect, and I think the starkness of the last sentence was great.