The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
How clever of you to mix Joy the dog, with joy of soul. Took me a while to catch on (though I did wonder at the "why" of some of your phrases). Nice job.
Nice twist..I had to re-read a few paragraphs, but overall nice story.
05/27/06
Nice twist. I felt you crammed a lot into the fourth paragraph (that pesky word-count) - perhaps it could make an article all on its own. Good work, though