The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Very nice! I like the way you connected each different scene with the last line of each paragraph. Good work.
05/27/06
Well constructed piece. We are designed in the image of GOd the creator - and joy flows from our creativity. GOod stuff
05/31/06
I like your structure and the way the entire piece flows. Of course I agree with your conclusion. Wisely and well written. God bless you!