The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Liked the idea of trying to explain such a concept as prosperity to a child.Glad the father encouraged Sam to give her child's understanding and then filled in with more details on her level.
05/19/06
I really like the relationship between Samantha and her dad. There are a few problems here with tense and with comma usage--and do Sunday School teachers really require essays? But I think you really "nailed it" with the dad's responses--and thanks for not feeling like you had to provide a neat, happy ending.
This is a good concept. Watch your punctuation. Good article.