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03/01/05
Thanks for sharing this story. You have used some great imagery to help me see the situation - like this phrase:

"Two souls in need drew further away with each rotation of my tires"

Nice job! Keep up the good work!
This is a good article on a subject close to the Lord's heart. The only element I see missing is where you would buy them some food to eat. Sometimes it is hard for those who are physically hungry to hear the "Good News" that Jesus loves them. Still, this is a good story.
I think sometimes it is easier to fix the immediate need and forget the long term need. But I think I still wanted to see some immediate needs met, i wanted to know the giver was understanding the need to be warm and fed too.