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05/18/06
This is beautifully written--I believe that C. S. Lewis would definitely approve.
Pat Guy  
05/22/06
This is fantastic! Awesome insights and so true about how Satan twists things around. Especially God's Word. Very creative and well written.
05/22/06
This is very good, but I did want to let you know that you have a typo in the first line: I think it should read "you have successfully persuaded..."
05/22/06
Echoing the others. The true enemy often uses just an element of scripture, just enough to make it sound like truth. Well written.
05/22/06
Very well written. As the others have said, this shows how Satan does twist the truth. Nicely done.
05/22/06
I think you kept true to original voice. Well Done.
05/22/06
This held my attention. Very good writing here! & creative!
05/22/06
This is a fascinating perspective on the topic, and very well-written. One error to fix: in the 5th paragraph, it should be "pique his curiosity" instead of "peak". This was a great read - you kept my attention all the way through!
05/22/06
Loved it. But I did find the first paragraph hard to grab at first. But that could just be me. What a perspective twist. We sometimes forget that our minds are the battle grounds. Nice Job
05/23/06
Creative, strong message! Great entry!
05/23/06
Don't you just love C.S.Lewis!! You've done a great job of echoing his wonderful style and purpose in his writing! Great job!
05/24/06
Good job! This is very interesting to read, I think you hit all the temptations for prosperity! Nice progression through to the end.
05/24/06
CS Lewis would love this. Tough writing well done.
05/24/06
I think you did quite well at staying in character in this peice. Lewis would beam I'm sure were he to read this! Keep up the good work!
05/26/06
Ditto, ditto, ditto! Very clean, tight, and loaded with the same creative subtleties that inspired Lewis. A courageous venture, carried off nobly!