The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. It really ministered to me.
05/12/06
Beautiful. Touching. This is a very well written piece. Thanks.
05/12/06
A delightful piece of writing full of hope, sparkling with joy and resonating with the goodness of God. You handled the transitions really well - a difficult task for even the most 'masterly' writer. Yeggy
A beautifully told story, wonderful in every way!
This is a terrific entry. I was touched. You provided a lot of rich sensory detail and brought me into the experience. Very well done.
05/17/06
This is written extremely well! And I believe if you're not already headed for advanced you soon will be! Nice story line, plotted well, just great all around! A real joy to read.
05/17/06
This is definitely a masterpiece, ready for publication. The beginning and ending in the present, like bookends holding the flashback, is a great vehicle for telling your story. Thank you very much!