The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Very nice. Thanks.
Now if I'll put it into pracitce.
05/12/06
Nice work. Try getting rid of the "as" for paragraph leads, and the piece will get much stronger.
Amen! I CAN do all things through Christ who strengthens me! I really liked this bit of honesty.
This is good. it's written well and the message is great. Watch the opening sentence structure. It was a good opening, but your first and second sentences need a little attention. Geat job.
05/15/06
I enjoyed the voice of your entry. The possiblities that become realities through Christ is the best message to convey to us all, and I thank you for this simply powerful reminder.
Nice message. I relate to the cycle thing. It is hard to change old patterns. God first. Amen!
05/17/06
Good ideas, well thought out and written. May God bless you in your goals accomplished in Him! Keep writing!