The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Nice descriptive narrative. A couple of grammar issues, but fairly well done. I liked the storyline. When my dad died we found money stuffed everywhere. He had been a young man in the depression when the family lost everything including money in the banks.
05/12/06
I have my mother's hope chest, but you have given it a new meaning. Good job.
I really enjoyed this story. Your description of the chest made me visualize it clearly. There are a couple of grammar problems, and your need to make sure you've used the correct word in one place, but overall, good job.
Lucille, I thought I was through reading for today, but the title to this one caught my eye. You say so much, in a relatively small amount of words. Something I need to work on! God bless.