The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
With the second person directive this is definately a sermon cutting. A powerful message.
Yeah, well said. I like the line and paragraph aboput you don't have to be in a concernttration camp to be in mortal danger!
05/13/06
this was powerful and carried a great point. I hope you write sermons / devotionals for a living! The only thing I would recommend for writing like this is to reference scripture a bit more strongly. Drive your point home with authority! :-)
I totally agree with the previous comments. However, watch your word usage. Your spell check won't catch things like using "piece" instead of "peace". Great job.