The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the line..."Where there is hope life finds itself ornately dressed."
05/11/06
Good poem, be careful with pace.
I really liked your poem, especially the line "hope
Is wealth of the soul". You need to watch the rythem because that can make it hard to read. Otherwise it's pretty good.