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Put spaces between your paragraphs and stretch this to a longer article and you will have a wonderful presentation of faith.
Yep, a little tightening and this would be GREAT! I loved the idea of "a living hope" - my synagogue is called "Living Hope" I'll have to share this with them there.
This piece is only a glimpse of your vision of the different stages of hope. It would be a blessing if you would flesh it out and bring it to life for your reader. Your analogies could be very powerful.