The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Watch convoluted language, readers can go astray - example I actually thought this essay was going to discuss fishing...until the second half of the work.
05/12/06
Sorry dud, I knew from the beginning what was happening here. Very creative description, and I agree: all babies should have "Hope" as their middle name.
wow, what a creative approach! I'm truly impressed.
The beginning had me guessing a bit, but you captured both the divine grandeur and the gut-works of human gestation and birth. I feel the wonder. And the hope. Good work!