The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
A pretty good mini sermon, please put a space between paragraphs for readability.
05/11/06
Ok, first off, formatting is everything. A space between paragraphs between helps the reader immensely. I did enjoy the usage of the theme over all; it’s just hard to read it.
wow, what an account. This was a terrific motivational piece. Thanks for writing it!
Good message. Separating your paragraphs will help as well as watching your punctuation. You have some sentence run ons, etc. You made some good points though.