The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Wow - I had difficulty finding the single key point here - many directions. Have someone read your essay before submitting, that way you can catch some of the minor errors.
05/11/06
As much as I enjoyed this essay, it might be better for you, as the author, to choose one direction and stick with it. It’s a hard lesson to learn, and I’ve been forced to learn it with my schoolwork.
What a great teaching on hope. I know it's not in the typical "story format" but you weaved important, well thought out truths in this devotional. Great work!
05/17/06
This is perfect! Instead of just giving us a definition, you began with an anecdote that gets the reader's attention. And, you have someone else looking for the definition (a great hook to keep us reading!). You give the best explanation I have read, yet, of the meaning of "hope!" I really appreciate this--it makes for a brilliant devotional. Thank you.