The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
Clever twist. Sell the ring, my dear. Nice approach and well done.
05/06/06
Hmmm...It won't surprise me if Ellen ends up a missionary in Burma someday! You have an engaging writing style and know how to build up to the climax. Skillfully done. Keep writing!
05/08/06
Very well done, flows well, and has a great ending. Keep writing!
05/11/06
This had a very clever ending. I really enjoyed reading it.